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by Anonymous

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by jd4george09/16/04

A painfully honest lament.

There were images throughout that tore at the heartstrings. Among them this nice passage:

"his blackmail lines repeated every night...
while wishes are trapped inside
and my tearducts are clogged
from the residue of false smiles and false dreams."

Thank you for the read.

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by WickedEve09/16/04

your poem

is mentioned on the new poems thread.
Thanks for sharing.

*no thermometer

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by flyguy6909/16/04

In love

with this poem! A frank and largely unsentimental look at the little steps that lead us to big trouble. Well done, DS.

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by Tathagata09/17/04

The pain

is tangible.
Thank you for sharing

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