Who says sex between cousins is incestuous? "The Table of Kindred and Affinity" in The Book of Common Prayer is more conservative than any legal code with 30 exclusions each to men and women but it says nothing about cousins.
The taboo aspect might have been more enhanced had you kept us in mund that the rest of the house was filled with family members. Tension. Your writing of the sex act was quite good. Didn't need her to have "been thinking about it for some time." Keep it up. Love your handle, oedipus. Maybe another story involving the Oedipal complex from you?
esl
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Anonymous09/20/04
Looking Forward to the Next one.
Nice first story. Keep up the good work. It's nice to see someone who knows how to use grammar, punctuation and spelling writing good, interesting stories that keep moving. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Anonymous09/20/04
To short!
Great story, but way to short! Try to add more details to help your reader see, feel, hear and smell what your characters are experiencing. Great idea introducing your sister. Can't wait to see where you go with that little bit of information!
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Anonymous09/23/04
More, Please, more!
Please don't stop now, this promises to be very HOT and very interesting.
I liked it because it was short and to the point.You don't always have to give a long preamble to the good stuff - I get bored easily, especially if the intro takes too long. I would love to read more stories!
English
Original
Good story. Very original storyline, but too short!
Questionable Relationships?
Who says sex between cousins is incestuous? "The Table of Kindred and Affinity" in The Book of Common Prayer is more conservative than any legal code with 30 exclusions each to men and women but it says nothing about cousins.
Not a bad story
Good start!
The taboo aspect might have been more enhanced had you kept us in mund that the rest of the house was filled with family members. Tension. Your writing of the sex act was quite good. Didn't need her to have "been thinking about it for some time." Keep it up. Love your handle, oedipus. Maybe another story involving the Oedipal complex from you?
esl
Looking Forward to the Next one.
Nice first story. Keep up the good work. It's nice to see someone who knows how to use grammar, punctuation and spelling writing good, interesting stories that keep moving. I'm looking forward to the next one.
To short!
Great story, but way to short! Try to add more details to help your reader see, feel, hear and smell what your characters are experiencing. Great idea introducing your sister. Can't wait to see where you go with that little bit of information!
More, Please, more!
Please don't stop now, this promises to be very HOT and very interesting.
Very good
I liked it because it was short and to the point.You don't always have to give a long preamble to the good stuff - I get bored easily, especially if the intro takes too long. I would love to read more stories!
I loved it.
Short is sometimes better than long and this one was just right! Thanks for a fine little tale.
Just read this story. It was short and I liked it great build up to whats to come. can't wait to read the next part
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