All Comments on 'The Personal Ads'

Not sure fantasy incest qualifies

I think this belongs in either the anal category or the fetishist category, I still loved this story. Well done.

Incest is a physical relationship between blood relatives. This isn't that.

Perhaps in the wrong category, but I really liked it! Would like another chapter...

It definitely feels taboo so I guess it belongs here as well as anywhere else. I'd love to see continue with it. 5*

Thanks readers. The category is getting changed to Fetish.

I hope so or it was nothing more than 2 adults fucking.

No mention of anal till later.

I'll skip most as this in NOT INCEST if they are just STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

I love how the "fantasy" takes over even the narrator's internal perception of the scene, ie. referring to Fran as his real mother. Remarkably few writers take that risk in role-play scenes, and you pulled it off really well.

I live next door to a 75 y/o woman. She is in very good shape for her age and I feel she is a beautiful woman. I know she wants to play because she told me her son was coming in and was picking up her husband to spend a day fishing. She already knows my wifes work hours. I'm retired.

Short, but very emotional and very naughty. I hope there will be pat 2!

Nice twist!