by ramoredrake
You did well developing your characters, I like them and know them. Verges on a beautiful story, but does not quite get there. The sex however is pretty routine, only about a six on my peter meter. I need more sensual information. Colors, sounds, smells, etc. What did his cock look like? Foreskin or not? dark or pink? wrinkled or smooth? Her pussy? What did it smell like? What color was it? did it change as she opened and unfolded? You did very well, but i just can't give you a five. I wish I could give you a four point five, but oh well, I gave you a four.
Oh God!!!!!! I have a new neighbor, a beautiful tall sexy black woman. She was not very friendly at first but has changed completely lately. I know something is building between the two of us. OH God will I fuck that beautiful black piece of ass. I'm a white middle age widower and haven't had any pussy in a long time.