All Comments on 'Sister-in-Law Slut'

Great story loved the twist, not so keen on the visuals

How did you do the illustrations? Looks like second life only better

Shemales cant cum. And arent real. Just a dude who got fake tits. So hubby took it up the ass from a real man cock and a fake one. So its wimp fag cuck shit. Plus if you do pix, these look to fake. See if you can get that Rebekka chick to draw you some more. Hers are better. So enough of the fag cucks and go back to straight or lesbos. Double standard? Maybe. But us guys except for the cucks are like geico. Its what we do.

You were from hot to not very quickly

i really like the story to bad you ended it wishing there was more to the story and how his wife clams her husband and then gets her brother to fuck his ass so that the husband more submissiveness come out and his wife becomes his mistress and he becomes a well-trained slave to his wife

U r so kinky I love it!

Awesome love your work keep them cummmmmiiiinnnnggggg !!!

This story NEEDS a part 2.

The gay male stuff did not belong in this story and made me lose my erection. Add in the mother in law, if you add the brother in law keep the gay male stuff out the story would improve measurably.

Well you have done it again and I hope this is not the end. Please continue with a family affair and bring in the Mother in law and brother in law, and then lets add some extra spice with the friend. You are the best.

Adding the male bi side is very sexy. Taking a strap on cock from my wife is top of my favorite sexy things we do. Seeing it in your story graphically is a huge turn on.

but the cheesy fake pics are just a turn off. and no, I'm not going to bother trying to scroll past them, dumbest fucking things I've seen. Well next to the 'text with audio' stories this site has.

Really Hot - Loved those awesome pictures! Great work!

I love this story and can't wait for part two where the friend that was in the pool join

Well this was a slow build dont get me wrong it was a good one. But WOW the end where the wife came in and took over where do i find a wife like that haha ;) This could definitely do with a part 2. You have so many good story's that i want sequels to

Another great story .keep it up good luck with the compertition

Hi Jaz

Even though, for me, this is not quite up to your usual exceptionally high standard, I wish you good luck in the competition. Also, I was not impressed with the quality of the illustrations. I believe my imagination, along with your vivid text would have provided a better result. Your still my favourite author, and I still love you.

Jack Auff x x x

very good, with a nice surprise, I too thought it lacked from your past submissions.

Jaz,

Another winner in my book. The only thing I didn't care for was the mention of Abby's brother. I can see at least 1 or 2 sequels down the road. Please keep them cumminnnnngggggg!

Amie

Variety Is Definitely The Great Spice Of Life! Men and Women Should Experience Everything Sexually, At Least Once To See What You Like!

wow ...I'm jealous... what a great arrangement.... the closet I ever got is when I walked in on my wife's sister being doggie fucked by her husband... I asked if he wanted me to take over but she said no...he said ok....lol... great story though... hope to read more of them.... (escapee from Jersey City who literotica doesn't seem to be able to sign me up)

One of the best stories I've read in a long time

Love it and you have to follow up with it the wife and I would like to add her sister to our fun reading times. Keep up the stories!!!

love this story and would love for it to continue.. only please don't turn him into a sissy or cuck. that would just ruin the for me.

I really liked the build up, not many authors can get that some very masculine men enjoy pegging but not as sissy boys or cross dressers. Would like to see it continue but not with him becoming a sub or cock whore.

You're always a 5 star read!

Awesome kinky stuff!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

A great story like always i get to play with my sister in law and motherinlaw august all of us will be together so their will be a lot of shaving going on with those ladies making them smooth. Please continue this story and include the motherinlaw this time thank you Jasmine.

Needs a part 2 and 3

When family cumms together pun intended.I mean I thought Abby was a prudish unwavering type wife,but at the end when she came out and reveal she set all that up I automatically thought she was a Wonderful Wife for letting her Husband and Sister fuck like wild animals.And to find out Abby was also a bisexual incestual dom to her younger sister was like icing on the cake.

Now all of them need to bring Amber's friend back over and have a wild 4some with strap-ons and dildos,and lots of other sextoys.Truly a load-blowing story.

It was a. Bit drawn out otherwise a great read

Nurses are always the hottest little freaks and surprised the guy hadn't figured out the wife was a slut too before he got taken in an unmanly way.. Poor sap after all that he should have taken more control and been the master of his two incestuous sluts and told them he wanted their hot mom to join and not the brother unless he was fucking mom or as His bottom bitch also.

Thanks for another enjoyable and interesting story.

Wow! Great story. I won't say how you could have made it better. I will say I had all the things I enjoy...hot wife, slutty sister-in-law, fallacious, cunninglingus, analingus, pegging, ATM, facials, bisexual incestuous women...I could keep going. Very well done.

D (& A)

So well written - drained after the third picture - a real scorcher

Hated the ending.......... You don't need to add the gay factor.

A close family can be the most satisfying if everyone is open and agrees. The husbands dedication to his sexy wife was admirable, especially with such a hot sexy slut in law. The wife's added open naughtiness was a pleasant sensual surprise,

As always, your story was well written, totally sensual and wonderfully rewarding for your characters.

Bud

474. This story didn’t need to stop here-why not continue. The seduction was fun and the incest even more so. However, if the guy is going to fall, I’d rather it be a pussy rather than ass that he succums to.

Now THAT, my Mistress of Silk, was a twist I didn't see cumming! 5/5 (smiles)