All Comments on 'The Beginning'

What a beautiful beginning! Hope you're planning to continue telling this story!!

This is an interesting beginning. Chase had control over Cat and brought her pleasure. Her concern was doing it right. There really is no right or wrong, in the beginning, it is between the two parties. What was more interesting was Chase at the start was feeling a loss of control but was able to gain it within himself. Also interesting is I assume Cat and Chase were more than friends and he received no release himself. It is a one sided pleasure although draining to initiate Cat to some of BDSM and I hope they continue on her exploration with Chase getting more than just the control from it.

Great start and it is beautifully written. I can't wait to read more of Cat's education into BDSM by Sir Chase.