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Hmm
I loved this :
"Not a bloody battle.
Tears fall along with the enemy.
Dragons are slayed without swords;
unrest is overcome."
Too many powerful stanzas to choose from. That one stood out. ;-)
Great work...
a wonderful poem about courage and change. Inspirational without being sappy. Very good!
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Excellent metaphorical piece with such powerfully vivid imagery.
enduring.
Grim rendering ~ with outstanding metaphors.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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THOUGH THE COMBAT WAS WORTHY
the overall task was not. TK U MLJ LV NV
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