I enjoyed the 19th Century English setting, there was just enough tension and build up and the sex is erotic, but not crude. I fancy Mark already! More please - I want to know the mystery of Miss Mountshaft too!
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Anonymous09/23/04
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yawn/ unfortunately i see that this story has a ch. 01 after the title/
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Anonymous09/23/04
Hot history
I always wanted my histotical novels such as Georgette Hayer to have some good hot sex in then. So well done, I hope that Mistress Mountshat is as raunchy as we are being lead to believe
If the author is as beautiful as this story is beautiful she must have a very lucky husband. I empathised with Silas at first, and then with Mark.
Keep on writing, and hasten the next chapter.
So well written, so explicit without the use of the lewdest terms.
Erotica at its best
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Anonymous12/02/04
I am not sure
I am not sure which one I would rather be - Mark or Silas. As for the daft comment below "Yawn", why did he bother to read three chapters if he was so bored. He should be bored - with an electric drill.
I see that this is Chapter 1. Any chance of my appearing in Chapter 2?
by
Anonymous02/02/05
Cream me baby
I would love to leave a dose of my own "anti wrinkle and soothing cream" for the lovely Lady C to apply as she seees fit, getting it out of the tube is most of the fun.
by
Anonymous02/25/05
dialog?
you need to work on dialog flow, diction, and other related techniques that make something readable. Try reading it out loud, to yourself. Wherever you pause, consider adding a comma, etc. Right now, dialog is stilted because of this.
.....you're right Anon, thank you for your comments, my dialogue (as we spell it in the UK) is rather stilted.
I hope that the hot sex goes some way towards making up for it! ;-)
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Anonymous01/08/06
yes she is
to the author of beautiful story comment. i can guarantee you 100%, lady clarissa is not only beautiful to look at she ia also a beautiful person. i truly hope her husband realizes how lucky he is and what an extraordinary woman he is blessed with.
Well done. A novice in the hands of an experienced woman. We all should have been so fortunate. Your writing truely portraes the feelings and emotions of both parties. Liked your Tale.
by
Anonymous06/11/09
Why?
Why, oh why, has it taken so long for me to find the work of this author. This is the finest piece of erotic literature I have found in many hours of searching this site. Head and shoulders above the rest of the contributors.
Just like the photo on your bio the story was divine. Full of suspense and intrigue with the sex delivered at just the right pace this is such an unusual piece for Literotica for you right erotic stories not porn.
I recall now why I contacted you all those months ago.
English
Glorious!
What a beautiful story! Perfect style. Thank you
Loved this story historical and erotic, more pse!
I enjoyed the 19th Century English setting, there was just enough tension and build up and the sex is erotic, but not crude. I fancy Mark already! More please - I want to know the mystery of Miss Mountshaft too!
/
yawn/ unfortunately i see that this story has a ch. 01 after the title/
Hot history
I always wanted my histotical novels such as Georgette Hayer to have some good hot sex in then. So well done, I hope that Mistress Mountshat is as raunchy as we are being lead to believe
Beautiful Story
If the author is as beautiful as this story is beautiful she must have a very lucky husband. I empathised with Silas at first, and then with Mark.
Keep on writing, and hasten the next chapter.
Great
Great story - loved it!
WONDERFUL
So well written, so explicit without the use of the lewdest terms.
Erotica at its best
I am not sure
I am not sure which one I would rather be - Mark or Silas. As for the daft comment below "Yawn", why did he bother to read three chapters if he was so bored. He should be bored - with an electric drill.
Still not sure
Forgot to leave my name on the last comment, as I want it to be known that I have tried to put down the stupid idiot who wrote "Yawn"
Next chapter?
I see that this is Chapter 1. Any chance of my appearing in Chapter 2?
Cream me baby
I would love to leave a dose of my own "anti wrinkle and soothing cream" for the lovely Lady C to apply as she seees fit, getting it out of the tube is most of the fun.
dialog?
you need to work on dialog flow, diction, and other related techniques that make something readable. Try reading it out loud, to yourself. Wherever you pause, consider adding a comma, etc. Right now, dialog is stilted because of this.
Re: dialogue
.....you're right Anon, thank you for your comments, my dialogue (as we spell it in the UK) is rather stilted.
I hope that the hot sex goes some way towards making up for it! ;-)
yes she is
to the author of beautiful story comment. i can guarantee you 100%, lady clarissa is not only beautiful to look at she ia also a beautiful person. i truly hope her husband realizes how lucky he is and what an extraordinary woman he is blessed with.
An Apprentiseship?
Well done. A novice in the hands of an experienced woman. We all should have been so fortunate. Your writing truely portraes the feelings and emotions of both parties. Liked your Tale.
Why?
Why, oh why, has it taken so long for me to find the work of this author. This is the finest piece of erotic literature I have found in many hours of searching this site. Head and shoulders above the rest of the contributors.
Divine
Just like the photo on your bio the story was divine. Full of suspense and intrigue with the sex delivered at just the right pace this is such an unusual piece for Literotica for you right erotic stories not porn.
I recall now why I contacted you all those months ago.
Well done m'lady
Your most humble servant
James
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