All Comments on 'His Dream Girl'

Please continue this. So much potential here, with both couples.

So good, well written . loved it

Please continue this story! So well written, and you have hit 99 percent of my fetishes. I want to see the high school bitch get hers too. Well, written with a minimum of mistakes that would throw a reader out of the story. You are very talented. Thank you.

Quite literally one of the hottest things I've ever read. Hope you continue writing!

This story has the potential to make a comic! You're very talented.

This was fantastic. You could make this into an excellent series.

Great story. I'm glad you took the time to develop likable, relatable characters before all the craziness hits. And that scene in the tub was very sweet. Bravo!

Omg thank you so much for writing this. For a long time i have been looking for a breast expansion story that was beautifully detailed and reached such extremes. I have often dreamed of being in Emily's position. Most writers on here don't know how to describe the way you have. Definitely going to be my go to story when i need to get off xx

Normally I'm not into absolute extremes. But this was written in an almost entrancingly way. A good read.

Wow! I never thought I'd meet anyone with a thing for lactation where the breasts are constantly leaking and dribbling! I thought I was the only girl in the world with that kink! :O

Also, her being a succubus took me by surprise! Nice twist! I thought it was some heredity condition. I wasn't WRONG, I guess, but I didn't guess at the full story. XD

Not only was this my exact fantasy, but you are an incredible writer! The frequent swapping perspectives, the character development, the dialogue, it was all realistic and very believable. Amazing job, 5 stars from me!

Probably the hottest expansion story I’ll ever read. Your way of writing is perfect, and I felt connected to both Emily and Jacob. Plus the expansion was legendary. Keep up the great work!

It is rare when you can image yourself playing out the role of a character in a story like this, but DocAutomata pulls it off. As do Jacob and Hannah... pull everything off that is.

The characters and their experiences are very well crafted and developed... realistic descriptions of unrealistic happenings, awkward dynamics that seem to fall into place, all the angst of teenage boy/girl relationships with none of the guilt, remorse and regret.

Can’t wait for the Netflix Original Motion Picture.

as a d&d fan learning about what she was was fun. plus the story was.... exciting....

Absolutely fantastic. Well written, paced out, the story had a good flow to it and didn't feel too rushed or forced, honestly a gem on this site.

I have come back to this story several times over the years and it still holds up as one of my top 3 favorites out there. Honestly if I could give more than 5 stars, i would

Excellent story! Very well written.

Very enjoyable and hot story. I just wish there were a way to entice you back to Lit, perhaps with a succubus as your muse?

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Funny, Hawt, Kawaii, und Zexxi!

11/10!!!!!

Matsusensei would be proud!

100/10!!!

That turned out fast different than expected. I felt like it was another hyper sorry that was going to get just stupid and be literally the size of a house with each tit. After reading to the big reveal, I was glad I had the feeling this was different. It's way better than if she could just shrink for no reason or grow with no explanation. Love it and hopefully everyone reads the story before the comments ruin anything

I'm looking forward to the continuation with Jacob, Emily and her mother Jessica, who knows, maybe thanks to Jessica Jacob will have a muscle fetish, or they will just do his usual fetish in a threesome