you tell the tale so well! Quite a nice scene -- everything it should be. It's neither too harsh or too soft -- it's just right. Like the characters, love the writing style. But mostly -- luv your creative genius. Thanks and take care...
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you tell the tale so well! Quite a nice scene -- everything it should be. It's neither too harsh or too soft -- it's just right.
Like the characters, love the writing style. But mostly -- luv your creative genius. Thanks and take care...
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