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truely great
i like the way this is going please send the next part as soon as possible. "jakk"
just great
enthralling story, very well written, can hardly wait for chapter 3
So sweet
This is such a sweet story but I feel so bad for Lucien. He's the one that always have to give. Maybe something should happen to the couple so that Sara would have to be the one to give in the relationship?
Wonderful tale :) Very romantic
However, the switching of 'persons' is very distracting, I don't think it is having the effect you were hoping for it to have? Changing from 2nd person to third person and back again is a bit jarring and stops the flow of this wonderful tale you are writing. I really mean that, it is a wonderful tale, except for that one small flaw.
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