All Comments on 'Ramona'

I would like to hear constructive feedback so I can improve future writing. How was the pacing? Build-up too slow? Ending too fast? Need more focus here, or less attention to detail there?

My first post here, sir (ma'am?) I guess you are breaking my writing cherry!

You have a delicious writing style, but for me, the spanking itself is the ultimate fun, right? It's what I want to hear about- use your amazing descriptive skills to tell us about the main event. How it sounds. How it feels under your hand. How you see her ass cheek spread under your masterful hand. How you caress and stroke her wounds.(Now I'm using my personal preferences, lol!). That was the part that was lacking for me, put I absolutely love your style and Alexis! Add a little more spanking detail, and you have a winner, winner, chicken dinner!

I'm a female sub, btw. So, I know a little bit about this. :-)