All Comments on 'Surprising Summer Job Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
surprising summer job

Good, as far as it goes. This should not have ended here. Seriously, each women should be her own chapter

alancampbellalancampbellover 6 years agoAuthor
Surprising summer job

Yes, that's what the plan is for each chapter. Thanks. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Surprising summer job

Had a similar exoerience at 19 only the woman was in her 60's

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Proofread much?

orgam? "in and out..." what exactly is going in and out?"

come on dude be more descriptive. i know you were trying to finish the story quickly so you could rub one out...but if your second chapter does not improve upon your first you might as well shoot me now to save me from reading such pathetic crappy writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"They done the normal routine..."

Really?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Well!

What did tomorrow bring?

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