All Comments on 'Ravenous'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Really enjoyed it, I hope you continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I don't care what your write just don't stop!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

I'm begging you, please keep writing this story. Don't leave us hanging! Literotica content has been really shitty lately and this story is the shining beacon of glory in a pile of trash. I NEED MORE!

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 6 years ago
very hot

Ravenous indeed--I felt the intensity!

Other than giving us a little on their history, let's see more of that in your next installment. Otherwise, this is the best 1-pager I've ever read in what promises to be a really nice story arc if you play it right. :) 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
sizzlin hot!

this was really good. please give us more chapters!

MimiRoseMimiRoseabout 5 years ago
Okay...t

Where-the-fuck was I and how did I allow this story to go right under my nose?!

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