All Comments on 'When you cum'

by CelestialDream

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wow!

Can't BELIEVE there's no comments on this yet!

Wonderful! Absolutely first rate.

I'd write more, but I'm going to go have an orgasm now!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Wonderful - thankyou

Princess_Of_DarknessPrincess_Of_Darknessalmost 19 years ago
One of the hottest

One of the hottest poems I've read on lit. yet. The reading was AMAZING. Very sexy. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
beautiful

i can hear it and feel it...you make me miss my lover deeply

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
HUH?

HUH?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Beautiful (I second that)

This one is a keeper. I would be proud to author something this fine (hope you are). Would you read it at poetry reading like you did here? Or with flattend tone, or not even at such an event?

thebeautifulthebeautifulover 14 years ago
incredible

filled with erotism, magic, and poetry.

Good job

Mr_Spicy_xoMr_Spicy_xoover 2 years ago

I don't like it , I love it

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