All Comments on 'Trees of Fortune Ch. 01'

Ok the story line is good but has ened suddenly. Did dear old dad suddenly come in and blew their heads off which could account for the abrupt finishes.

one out of five. did you get scared of writing your first incest story?

Dude. Really? This is the first chapter of a story. You can't possibly be that dense.

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Oh my .... was I that obvious? but yes you are correct this is my first time writing on incest.

Not a bad start. A little short yet you do a nice job providing anticipation for what's to come, if you don't mind my pun.

The mother cross-dresses her son and still likes the torrid idea for sex with him. He lives as a "daughter" yet will be a submissive to her. You could have him be bi-sexual to men for money and hire an ex-husband killer. You could have the son grow into a man to revenge the father's treatment.

Interesting and unusual story. Plot development unusual.

What is this ????? 3 stars