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by z00time09/30/04

Very rare.

What tremendous love Sally has for Chris. I almost always feel sad for the spouse that is cheated on, angry with the selfish spouse that is cheating, and really pissed at the lover. Not that way in this story, actually, just the opposite.

This writer, with very few words, gave me a huge emotional charge.

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by Ghost Bear09/30/04

Different type of story

A very original plot. A woman who has control over a man but frees him so he can go back to his wife. Very well written. Please keep writing.

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