All Comments on 'Experiences at the Surgery Pt. 03'

I love your writing skill and style. The characterisation is very well done.

I hope you continue with the series.

I really like your style and the setup of your story, it hits many of the kinks i like and i hope you write much more very soon!

greetings from germany

I read all three chapters in one continuous, engrossing stretch. You have weaved and built this up in an amazing manner. Will eagerly wait for your fourth chapter.

But very well done.

Thank you.

Marion broke a cardinal rule, Jane used her safe word and she refused to stop. This just isn't done.

@Bad Form: that's actually not true. Jane said that she wanted to use her safeword, but Marion urged her not to, and she did not. This was stretching boundaries,

Nice story!