All Comments on 'A Shadow at The Biograph'

I really enjoyed this but if you need to tell us someone was a ghost or whose ghost they were, then they weren't. Next time work these details into the story. The ghost could tell he is John Dillinger and she takes it as a joke. She could have noticed that his reflection in the mirror was translucent or perhaps when all was done she could see a photo on the wall of JD and realize what had happened.

All that said, I really enjoyed so keep up the good work.

Fantastic description, interesting story.... I loved it, keep up the good work!!

They don't make 'em like they used to. She got her wish. I love the story.

JudyLee

Love this! I would spread my legs for the ghost of John Dillinger to eat my wet pussy, or maybe just a naughty professor?! Hmmm 🤔 😉