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A very fierce...
poem in my opinion. Strong emotions come through. Nice work irish!
A beggar's banquet, indeed.
L&F is right on with his comment.
In this strange day of happenstance, as I write this comment, a squirrel has rooted through the compost pile outside and is busily devouring the butt-end of a loaf of bread. Now, I'm wondering about the vultures!!!
determined
and detached.
Much strength and resolve here.
: )
You are finding your voice.
keep it up
Excellent
Very compelling imagery, ICM.
good reading.
i agree with Tath / your poetry is getting stronger, finding a voice /
very nice...
especially the last line "and compete for this worthless fodder." Thank you!
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Another excellent piece from that Poetry Class of '04.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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