Bets

Perfect

Fantastic! A story with a real emotional heart to it.

I remember...

What might've been? Often asked and rarely ever known. I love how easy it was to connect with the characters in this story. Flashing back to the past piqued my interest immediately and the culmination of so many years and HOT desires was fabulously done. Success, sweetheart. I know, I know, business as usual for you. Nice work, CT.

~lucky

OK, that was superb.

The first time I've ever commented on a Literotica story, but that was superb. Brilliantly erotic. Brilliantly poignant. Wonderful (and entirely credible) characters. Well sketched back story. Great sex. In fact I think the thing that makes this story stand out is the contrast between extreme physicality and extreme tenderness. Beautiful. I would love to be good enough to write like this.

superb

DO I HAVE TO COMMENT ON THIS???
OK HERE IT IS S-U-P-E-R-E-B JUST LIKE ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES.I HAVE NO IDEA WHERE YOU GET THE IDEAS FROM OR HOW YOU MANAGE TO WRITE SUCH EROTICH AND LOVELY STORIES BUT SOMEHOW YOU DO. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

YOUR GREATEST FAN ASHLEY

Excellent Work

A really fine piece of work Colleen. Superb characterizations, good settings, and fine writing.

Well done.

Great As Always

Colleen you are the crown jewel of Literotica. Thanks for working my lovely hometown into your beautiful work.

Very well written

This story is entirely enjoyable. It is well written and every character seems firmly based in reality. I could read an entire book like this. Great writing!

WOW

This was wonderful. the depth of emotion, eroticism, and characterization were superb. more, more , more!

So Impressed

I have a new hero. Seldom have I found a better writer or story teller in any genre. Bravo.

Very well-written story! Definitely worth 5 stars

I really liked the flashbacks and also your sensually descriptive overall writing style! It made for an excellent and highly erotic story! I also loved the fact that the two women were of different builds and temperments, with Bets more submissive to her more dominant lover. This was a very enjoyable read. I also liked the way the narrator took pleasure in watching another woman's pretty rear end early in the story. Sexy butts shouldn't be ignored in lesbian stories!

Love it

Great story.

"Love conquers all"? Love that. :) Thanks for a well written story.

What they said ;)

Baby, you just keep getting better.

*HUGS*

Great story

Great story! You managed to describe love between the two women both with delicacy and eroticism, as a logical conclusion of their former relationship. I hope you will tell us more about what happened after that first day!

As Ever ...

... simply wonderful.

As Always....

Thank you yet again for sharing your wonderful gift... Left me breathless.. as always....

wooo (wipes brow)

lol...I want to meet this Chauncy!

Wet story

a friend said to read your stories, hers were good but she said yours were better, i read it at work before anyone else arrived, i am so wet, i am going to read more of your stories at home tonight, you are very good.

UM WHOA?

For lack of a better word, WHOA! I loved the story especially the dialogue! I felt like this story was so honest and heartfelt. Thank you so much for writing it. *hugs*

Gahhhhhhhhhhh!

Where's the 125% category? Far and away the best story I have ever read here. When I grow up I want to learn to really write, my lessons are your latest works.
Thank you.

3 words:

GOD DAMN HOT!!
you never disappoint your readers, what a great story.
this is why you are one of my favorite authors on this site.

I can't believe I waited this long to read this...

you may kick me later.
I can only support the words of praise given here since I have no words that would out match what is already known.

You are a storyteller of great capacity, you take us into your worlds, introduce us to wonderful people and let us watch them fall in love.

one wonderful writer

First off i'm not a lesbian, just a bi male. That was a very superbly written story, you definitely have talent as a writer. i'd lke to read some more of your stories.

Gerald

wow!

colly: as always, your ability to weave together dramatic tension and hot action leave me deeply, deeply envious. your flair for writing is amazing and i hope to be seeing your name in amazon.

ed

Great Reading

So glad I found your stories. This was a super love story with great loveable characters I was happy to see found true love in the end. Great work!!!

Sensitive Lovely Story

Besides enjoying your wonderful story, I felt like I had made a return trip to the City by the Bay. Colleen, you, yourself are a Wonder! I feel rich because I have so many more of your delightful stories yet to read.

WOW

Not only did I like the story telling and the characters, I haven't cum like that and for so long, well, I can't remember when. WOW!

::sigh::

You're fucking awesome. That's...really all there is to it.

This is pure class

and I am in awe. Such meaning and so beautiful. I read it three times, and then printed it out. How you moved me with such a true depiction of finding lost love. Oh, this is grand. I have heard you are gone, but trust me, you live on in the hearts of little 20 year old lesbian wannabees, you're the be.

amazing

Touched me. Great story. Thanks

Beautifully written

Thank you for a touching story that had real characters and a real life-thread. Exceptional!

Pretty damn good

Seriously well done!

love it

This is probably my favorite story. It has a credible and interesting storyline and believable characters. There a couple things that confused me, though. Where did the strap on come from? Bets didn't feel it when she undid Chauncy's shorts, and than her shorts came off and there's no sign of it.

@FiveWolves
I think you might have missed the part where she lost consciousness after her orgasm. :)

A creative writer who knows how to pace a story and keep it interesting. It is sad you stopped posting here.

The author

The author unfortunately for all of us fan's and readers has "Gone West" a while ago.

i love colleens stories

But i gotta admit her obsession with strap-ons gets old. If i remember correctly, there was even one in her friggin pirate story for cryin out loud XD i mean cmon, really? For an obvious lesbian, she sure did love dick 8/