All Comments on 'Fling Maybe? Ch. 03'

by leeleeMarie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes!

Phew! If she didn't love him, I would have been devastated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
BABIES.......

Loved it. They be happily married on the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is Erotica

You know how to write an interesting story and convey passion. I will be waiting for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You are an accomplished writer!

I enjoyed your story, two broken hearts healing together... Can you tell us what happened to the mates, Gemma and Darren.... perhaps they contract Leperacy, or fall off a cliff and are paralyzed from the neck down?

Again, great job!

LitLover469LitLover469over 6 years ago
It Can't Be Over...

Please, please, PLEASE tell me there's another chapter coming!!! I'm so in love with these two characters and this story! I'm not ready for it to be over.

leeleeMarieleeleeMarieover 6 years agoAuthor
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Hey Guys thanks as always for your feedback and encouragement. I just submitted chapter 4 ( long overdue I know) just waiting approval from the people in charge. Monette and Gregory's story will be coming to end in another chapter or two and I will be moving on to another lovely couple of freaks lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
what is taking so long, Powers that be?

I have been checking 3 times a days since Leelee Marie said she submitted on the 6th.... What is happening? How long does it normally take? I am dying!!!!!! lol

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 6 years ago
In the words of Rick James....I'm Just A Sucker for Your Love!

I love Greg and Monette and they need to have a long and happy, loving life together with their 3 children and dog.

I love this story with or without sex! 5 Stars!

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