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This story is fantastically hot!
It has it all. Erotic tension, an actual loving couple, the excitment of possible discovery. Excellent work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Superb work!
This is a delicious little scene, sensual, delicious, and capable of both elegance and raw sizzling power. The author has beautiful control of the language and moves us from prim to animal to romantic to lustful with smooth, effortless power. Well done indeed.
Exquisite
Not a word out of place, a perfectly controlled piece of ever-increasing passion.
Superb!
Really gorgeously hot story! Incredibly well constructed and executed! loved it!
esl
Great story
Very hot. Good build up and sexual tension. Write more and I'll be reading.
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