Very nice and very believable!
i just wish there had been more descriptions on the sex... *sad face*
but then i'm just a horny dirty person anyway =P
*off to read more of your stuff*
i'm so glad you left a message on the "Mean Anonymous" board... i love checking out new authors! =D
Kind of hard to believe when a female's cherry is on the inside. The minute his dick went in her; the cherry was gone. It's no deeper than the membrane that may or may not be obstructing the vaginal opening.
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Hot =)
Very nice and very believable!
i just wish there had been more descriptions on the sex... *sad face*
but then i'm just a horny dirty person anyway =P
*off to read more of your stuff*
i'm so glad you left a message on the "Mean Anonymous" board... i love checking out new authors! =D
Decent..
a littly choppy in spots, but a worthy effort. ;) Keep writing! I'm on to read some of your newer stuff. VA
I enjoyed it very much.
Keep up the good writing. I would love to read more.
Ummmmm
Kind of hard to believe when a female's cherry is on the inside. The minute his dick went in her; the cherry was gone. It's no deeper than the membrane that may or may not be obstructing the vaginal opening.
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