by TiefBlau
I feel bad for him going through that for her and she didn't even know. And not to be humiliated like that, it wasn't like he was even in to it really.
I found it great. Till the end. He gave him self for her to have a dream.not right.
This was a great story until the end. You might want to create an alternate ending to lead into the next chapter. I could be wrong though maybe you have a plan. Don’t take to long with part two please.
While it was undeniably arousing it also felt a bit too dark for my taste. I love gangbangs, rough sex and cum swallowing, but in this particular scenario it was all too real, too emotionally painful for the protagonist. I guess some would consider it an advantage, but that's not something that I personally look for in porn. I'll still read the second episode though.