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Taps is tops
Loved it - need I say more?
Lukas
I used to have you listed as a 'favourite'
However, your last few stories have shown little of the delicate and thoughtful charm of your earlier pieces. Now they are rather crude, not just in the setting but in the way they are crafted. I miss the old moondrift and the other names in which you wrote by. Maybe one day, you'll discover him again, until then, I am afraid I won't be reading much more of your work. Once you tasted the artistry of your earlier works, the pale repeated imitations really leave a bitter taste in your mouth.
I thought the beginning was interesting
I haven't read the rest.
I'm too drunk now, and I have issues!
Concentrate on the story
Nice story but far to bogged down with correct English & attempt at showing how literal you are, far more concentration needed on the story moreso than the literary correctness
Witty! Funny! Beautiful & devious--I love it.
It's this kind of playfulness you create in your stories that keeps me coming back, Moondrift. Wonderful story. Sexy, steamy, funny, naughty--everything I love. Keep writing them this way and you have a fan for life! ~ Candlelight062
I don't know who you're trying to impress,
but I concure with; 09/28/05 by Anonymous in Australia, when they said; Concentrate on the story, Nice story but far to bogged down with correct English & attempt at showing how literal you are, far more concentration needed on the story more so than the literary correctness. This is the only reason I gave you a 25.
Critiquing some critics.
It seems only fair that those who would criticize the author about writing style should at least know the difference between "literal" and "LITERATE" Of course, this is just my opinion. But there are sufficient other stories of their genre, 'strokers,' for their satisfaction.
Taps . . .as they say inNARfulk
It made me smile. Your humour is appreciated. A previous Aussie said it was crude. No way! They must have had to many XXXX the night before!
fun story
nice - great sex- good story
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