All Comments on 'A First For Us Both Ch. 1'

Cute story. I liked it.

good but do some research next time on the position of the hymen it is not 4.5 inches inside the vagina only 1-2 inches keep it realistic and believable

My sister and I lost our virginity to each other. She was 14 and I was 16. It started out with mutual masturbation sessions then moved to masturbating each other. Next came oral sex and from there fucking wasn't too much of a leap. It wasn't forced or anything we both look at it as a beautiful thing

good plot but very bad writing way to many STUPID errors this needs a total rewrite and good editor.

I loved it. Thanks

Cool.....

I'm pretty sure you're a female author, coz all that lovey dovey stuff doesn't happen so easy from a guy's mouth, especially a brother. I mean I've fingered my cuz and it just happened ya know. And she didn't like it even though she got wet and into it. And it's a waste story no matter how much quality it's got. Can't believe you've got such views. I've read on literotica for years. Go and read Whisper in her Ear

Will read on

Only giving you four stars because this was rather rushed I feel. No build up or anything he just comes home sees her and decides to go make it up by fucking her... not the most realistic.

Female anatomy 101. The hymen is at the entrance of the vagina, not half way in; that would be kind of pointless.

Not bad. 3/5