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by Phantom192509/30/04

Not bad...........

Short & simple n/c story........good for a quick wank.

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by Anonymous10/04/04

Chapter Two

This story needs to be finished, as she is upset and confused at what has happened between them both. You can't leave an old lady in this state.

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by Anonymous12/02/04

Need more chapters

You have stumbled on a very interesting and stimulating story line. Don't presume that although Mrs. Greene is 60 that she isn't immune to sexual excitement. Robert might have awakened forgotten memories and feelings. Sylvia's eyes might see Joan, Peter and Robert as surrogates for her needs. Don't give up now but you do need to involve the reader through the use of descriptions. I know from experience, mature women are insatiable and 60 isn't old by any means.

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