All Comments on 'Odd Jobs'

you have stopped really writing and are just using a template.

I liked it. There are always critics. I read a lot of crazy stories, then the comments, usually by some dork that use be my English Teacher. Ahh, but English is English and the American language has many sources and cultures so who gives a crap about English. Funny story too and seems to me a different idea and approach.

Write some more.

...and so do most literate people. There are rules of grammar and spelling, do you think that being American just an excuse for ignorance these days? Not for me it isn't!

This story, like so many of Ashton's efforts, is about sexual abuse, rather unpleasant.

I don't normally read Ashson's stories, but I picked up the comment about his use of American English so I gave it a quick skim to see what the problems were. I didn't find any glaring misuse of the English language.

So to the Anonymouse who "Gives A Crap About English", would you like to identify the problems that you feel are there?

And it's a good idea to look at the author's biographical notes before you make assumptions about authors being from America (by which I assume you mean the USofA). If you had done so, you would have realised he is Australian.

Other Australians may not necessarily be proud of that fact. As Kimi frequently complains, Ashson's stories are often rapey. And even when they're not, as Powertool noted, his stories mostly follow a standard template. Usually there are exploitive men taking advantage of silly young women. That's why I don't read them. It's not his use of English that I see as the problem

But, anyhow, to each his or her own. Literotica is a free site so it didn't cost you anything.

Lue

This one felt a bit more personal because my name is actually Miranda and I'm 18 so I was able to get into it pretty quick lol. I think I'll go read your other stories lol

Ashson I enjoyed the story. Just simple & straightforward but I liked it. I still wish you would avoid any talk of rape.

the subject of this and most of Ashon's stories is ' non consent and reluctance'

if you don't like this subject wtf do you read them for ??

they are mostly well written with some Australian slang in the writing

if you are not here for any other reason than to bash the author what good are you except another internet troll

obviously someone likes the subject or it would not be a category ~

and how many of Ashon's stories been voted into the literotica HOF by the readers

haters gonna hate and not all of the stories are HOF worthy

I don't get all the negative comments

for me I like the stories and fantasy ~ as we all know ~ if anyone behaved like this in 'real ' life they would be writing from prison

keep up the great work Ashon

from a devoted reader

John Spencer

Dallas Texas U S A

I do wonder why this is in erotic couplings and not in non-consent (Rape by any other name is still rape.) I can only conclude that it's here because fewer readers are to be found in non-consent and the author wants to capture more eyeballs. It could also be that the author likes stirring the pot (the true definition of "troll") or is trying to legitimize the most reprehensible of sexual activities except pedophilia, which is rape as well.

There is nothing erotic about rape which is more about power and pyschopathy than anything sexual. I suspect that there are a few who enjoy this theme and there is a specific hub for it so why not publish there?

I love this story. Very exciting.

What a good story, loved the idea fast and easy to read, BUT for a word smith it’s off OFF not bloody of..... you get your clothes OFF.