All Comments on 'A New Town'

Keep on writing, you got me hard and dripping!

Wish I was there sucking that cock and enjoying that cum

Excellent story; I agree you should keep writing. I'm a top, and would have swallowed that hard cock!

Other than a few minor errors..caps (I not I), spelling (fantasizing not fantasizing) and seventh from the last line (don't know what you mean? You have the beginnings of a very good story. Keep up the good work!

Second paragraph, first line "could of" should be "could have".