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this has a quite, haunting feel to it, I really like it. the colors and the words are very deep, good work :)
I know
the feeling.
So much said in this.
Great work.
I can relate!
Very, very nice.
*sigh*......
...so you love her too??
Completely empathise. The brevity is perfect. No more needs to be said. Mat
that sucks...
the situation, not the poem.
:kiss:es
This is one of my favorite sayings: *The worst way to miss someone is to have them standing right next to you and knowing you can't have them.* Your poem made me feel the same thing..
~Honey
realistic
Facing the truth of someone standing right next to you that you desire but can't have. Nice appropriate photo.
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Haunting vision, haunting words; never to have the rest of you {at least the 'you' you hoped for}.
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