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by Anonymous

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by jd4george09/29/04

The Moment Waits...

...is a good title, (hint, hint). Though I liked this, I found myself tinkering with order, repetition, and line breaks.

That a poem makes me do this, is good. It's an evocative graphic, L&F!

(As I did tinker a bit, I'll send that to you elsewhere).

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by twelveoone09/30/04

Your Moments

are better than mine

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by duddle14612/30/06

reminiscent

The illustration was self explanatory. That moment just before the first kiss. Words whispered softly touching the pulse of sensual love. Lovely rendering.

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by LeBroz02/07/07

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That moment when time seems to slow to a crawl and all the world's watching.

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by tazz31703/21/12

A SPLIT CAN BE A LONG TIME

or a term in bowling. TK U MLJ LV NV

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