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by Gothrockboheme

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
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Lots of bare-naked emotion in this one, very powerful. Could use some trimming: I think the point could be made in fewer lines and, therefore, produce an even more powerful poem. Nice work, Goth.

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