All Comments on 'The Magic of Camerawork'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Changing people permanently into 'sluts', or incestuous is _way_ too rapey for my tastes. Otherwise, it's hot as hell, as always. Please stay a few sentences short of creepy, as you mostly have till now

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 6 years ago
Fuck that was hot!

All in all it was the perfect balance between length, pace and unfolding of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story!

Looking forward to the follow up! Great piece,

puncturepunctureover 6 years ago

That was brilliant. More please

Timtom12Timtom12over 6 years ago
Great story!

Looking forward to more!

One comment, Kathy took a picture after telling John to not move and to stick his finger up his ass. Shouldn't he revert to that once she took the camera off him?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

This was amazing and I'd love to see more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please proofread

Amusing concept, 2 hot threesomes, but the spelling & grammar errors make bumps in an otherwise smooth ride.

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