by blkngry
Changing people permanently into 'sluts', or incestuous is _way_ too rapey for my tastes. Otherwise, it's hot as hell, as always. Please stay a few sentences short of creepy, as you mostly have till now
All in all it was the perfect balance between length, pace and unfolding of the story.
Looking forward to more!
One comment, Kathy took a picture after telling John to not move and to stick his finger up his ass. Shouldn't he revert to that once she took the camera off him?
Amusing concept, 2 hot threesomes, but the spelling & grammar errors make bumps in an otherwise smooth ride.