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by Anonymous

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by BUICK GS10/02/04

NO MORE!!!!!!!!

IF THAT IS THE MOST STEAMY PARTS OF YOUR RELATIONSHIP YOU CAN CONTINUE TO KEEP YOUR STORIES THE SECRET THAT THEY HAVE BEEN.

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by jim9inch10/07/04

Write some more.

I liked the story. I am not an editor and don't read the stories for proper grammer.

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by Anonymous11/02/04

Bleh

This is crap. I think that you need to know that no girl in the whole world acts like that. You write like a poorly educated 12 year old. Please, don't make me suffer through anymore of your bad writing.

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by Anonymous11/02/04

larry knob

She spat on larry knob. Me so horny. Lengthy larry write one page story. Not so lengthy, larry. Merciful, yes. Lengthy, no.

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by Anonymous11/02/04

Size

If Lengthy Larry is a lengthy as his stories, he must be call Stubby.

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by Anonymous12/01/15

All talk, no substance

You talk about how your character wants to fuck the girls but never does. Do you go soft every time you're about to fuck and that's why you whack it every time? Pathetic

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