All Comments on 'Playtime'

Very well written: extremely descriptive and highly erotic.

The powerful effect of your words have driven me beyond anything I ever expected. I am veryticklishsoles in the Y.

Ticklishsoles

Ending was rather climatic. How could you pour so much descriptor behind the motivations and inner thought processes of the characters, not to mention the sexual actions themselves, but make the ending so lackluster with little to go on? Its like, wham bam, thank you maam, and the art ended once you got your rocks off. Completely ruined it for this reader.

He stood up and beat her to a bloody pulp. Because what would stop him? Stupid?

1 star

I disagree with the critique. I liked the buildup and then the sudden release. It was real and made me want to be him... Loved the succinct writing and style.

Perfect, just perfect, may I be next, Mistress?