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VERY NICE!
this story was one of the most exciting things i've read in a long long time. i love how he treats her like a princess. i do hope you keep writting, i see wonderful things coming from your fingers. keep up the good work!!
jazzy
More please!
You've done it again hun! I can't wait to see more of these two. I look forward to the next part!
Enjoyable
I enjoyed the story. It had just the right amount of tension and the length was right too.
Trapper
Sexy
Great story. It reads well and has all the right ingredients to make me wish I was her!
HMMM!
Ohmigod! If only I could live that just once...what a lovely thought... Thanks for that!
WET!
fantastic. made me wet thinking of what and how he was playing with her keep the story going!
incredible!
Very hot. Loved how you depicted the "punishment," not the brutality of other BDSM, but capturing it erotically.
made me hot!
I want to hear the rest
MADE ME WANT MORE!!!!!
I LOVED IT. THE PUNISHMENT WASN'T THAT BAD LIKE OTHERS I HAVE READ. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF.
How very lovely!
Oh, darling thank you for that I rarely see such eroticisum in BDSM. I enjoyed that imensely, and so did my Master when we tryed it out....what a wonderfull night all because of you.
Very sensually evocatine...
I've reread this for about the fifth time now...and hey, voted on it with the first reading, honest! Always seemed to get interrupted before I could leave any public praise tho. One of the yummiest stories I have read in the BDSM genre. Since I don't stand up too well to pain either-I flinch just reading about some things-I appreciated your description of her punishment. But there's something about a spanking, er, yeah...loved how you depicted hers. Very pleasing read!
yes
u definatly can write a very sexy story i loved the slow and fast pace wishing i had my lover here right now
delicious
i was pissed when it ended
HOT HOT HOT
That was one fo the most erotic stories that i have read in a while. Gurl the was Hot keep on writng cuz if you do i'll read it Hot story!!!!!
awww
also upset that it ended!!! keep it up!
Perfect
Perfect depiction of one of my favorite fantasies. Thank you...
mmmmmmm
Have to say one of my favorite fantacies too nicely written but so sorry when it ended
Excellent
I loved this story I am sittining here getting ready to reread it
Just a little tame.
I am a man, but your story isn't far from my fantasies where I am the victim. Well written. Good job, could have been kinkier and longer. But then I'm a perv, what can I say?
More
I loved it i just wish there was more. I know exactly how she was feeling i felt it my first time with me being submissive. You really should make another chapter to go with this.
Great
Great story. Would love to see another chapter. My fantasy exactly.
"A Break In" is stupendous!
josie girl,
Thank you for writing this! Your story is so erotic, so real, so hot -- I can fell myself be part of it. I long for such a touch. Please write more.
R
A good fantasy
It is a good start but damn you got me wet and didn't finish the story curses.. please finish next time I need an orgasm !!!!!1
Very Nice
You're a good writer, and this was really enjoyable
great!
personally i like stuff a little more hardcore but this was great! a little more pussy eating would be nice tho :)
Good
Great story but then what happened? :D
good!
I want what she had!!!
More
More?
wow
No complaints that was great. Thank you
good job
u left me wanting to know more to find out what in store
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