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by Softly Whispers10/04/04

I am enjoying the vignettes

But I wish they flowed together better from one chapter to the next. Probably this is just a personal preference on my part and no reflection of your writing skills. I just find myself wondering what built up during the day, in both their minds, before they met up again.

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