All Comments on 'Kakariki Kinship'

by wildsweetone

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Beautiful

A vibrant, verdant poem of nature's web. Well done, wild one!

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
This

~Dark green foliage

slow swaying windswept

arc, cleaning dreary

morning mist.~

What a great image.

Very nice poem

Thank you

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
language

such an exotic word compared to the english version, the poem frames it well.

Last stanza was gorgeous life springing

I will be watching your poems as they come,

~anna

RybkaRybkaalmost 17 years ago
A Mention

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=22735812#post22735812

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