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by Anonymous09/20/17

An old codger's fantasy

I've been there watching those young pussies, friends of my kids, all just bursting with the urge to mate. Some you'd like to love and help discover their unknown potential, while others you'd just want to fuck and fuck and fuck until you got tired of each other. The rest didn't matter. But then there was the HS senior who looked like Natalie Wood that all the guys just wanted to protect. Others of note looking like grow up women.
But it was all fantasy because there's wife and kids and community outrage and most important of all your own moral code. It has to stay a fantasy, too! After all, who could you possibly tell?

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by Anonymous09/20/17

very well written!

That was hot and exciting. Thanks!

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by Anonymous09/20/17

Not Bad

Interesting. 1 page to long but very enjoyable. Ready for the next chapter. Dad Lauren and Gayle maybe?

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by Anonymous09/27/17

Nice.

Please continue.

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by scorge3010/09/17

Please continue

I would like to read more of this story line. I would like to see coach and his former player "accidentally" end up in a relationship so coach does not feel the need to wear a condom. Erotica is fantasy, in my fantasy there are no STDs so I do not want to read about condom usage. Other than that slight gripe (which I can ignore with such good writing) I loved it.

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