All Comments on 'Creation's Guardian Ch. 12'

Glad you're back and please continue can't wait to see what happens next and please don't take to long on the next chapter.

This series is fantastic.... completely over in all the right ways

Welcome back. I enjoyed your return. Keep them coming!

I love this chapter and the surprise that you put in here. I like that there is going to be an alliance between these two powers and hopefully there can be an exchange of technology. I'm glad to see that you are back to writing this story. Please don't take as long for the next chapter.

I was really happy to see this chapter posted. I had started to think that you we're not going to continue. So glad to see I was worng. So please keep the chapter's coming.

I don't give 5 * very often, but I do think that this series deserves the rating. Please continue to regal us with your fantastic imagination.

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It follows the rest of the storyline perfectly. I just felt that this piece of the story was a bit rushed. I still have it saved under favorites though, looking forward to more.

You really have tied the stories together. Well done! Please keep writing.

There were many places in this chapter that I could've gone into greater detail. I can understand why some people may think it's a bit rushed. However, the main objective of this chapter was to finish tying the two stories together...Bob54z

I have been waiting for this story to continue. I know that it takes time but, it's a mark of a good story and writer that the next chapter can't get here soon enough. Your doing a great job in that respect. Hope to see another chapter soon, though I feel that we should be able to wait until you are ready.

I have only one question to ask. IS THERE GOING TO MORE OF BOTH STORIES??????

Maybe you could have Lyssa meet the boss so she'll believe and know she's got back up

Had started to give up hope on another chapter... excellent job. .. eagerly await the next chapter and good job towing the 2 stories together.

I’m so happy your back to writing this amazing adventure I love both stories so I’m hoping for great things to come as I love your writing style and that amazing brain you’ve got lol.

I hope that both stories continue very soon. I like them both a lot.

so looking forward to reading more of this story , hope you have more coming , cause i don't see this as done yet ………!

Cannot wait to read more.

Are you going to continue, please give us a update on how cg13.

If your going to have warp drive look up runabout Star Trek for local use.

What happened to the interview with Stacy did everyone get to busy to remember or forgot maybe now everyone is settled they can do the interview that was promised back CG CH.05. I would like to see how goes and what people think afterwards.

where are the rest of the chapters, when will we be reading more of this series... great read

how much longer before the next chapter.

when is the next chapter.

Next Chapter Please!!!!

Where's the rest of it there has to be more

I wish you had kept the two stories separate. Having Lyssa in this story is wasted. Creations story has Bob fucking lots of women while the other story actually had intrigue that was enjoyable. Oh well.

Male = evil, except Bob cause he's perfect, Female = doesn't matter what she did, she has holes Bob can use so she is forgiven.

Despite the horrible nicknames and other issues with this story, I enjoyed it but this is getting worse, not better. I'm out

Just when I thought it was over it went off obliquely

Well done