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by Anonymous11/06/04

Romantic and sexy story...

Beautifully passionate...
Even 'dirty' girls like me can appreciate knowing what this feels like from your point of view.
Maybe you can write about what it feels like for you when she is swallowing your cock... Gently or forced, either way is hot. (for this dirty girl)

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by Anonymous08/05/05

For me?

Such love; passion.... This writer - he must be something special....
He really did love me I think. I was just too jaded to feel it. His words will haunt me forever....

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by Anonymous08/27/06

Wonderful

Beautiful and very erotic. Wonderful work

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by Anonymous04/23/13

the disappointing sting of reality vs. fantasy...

shamefully sweet story....why can't there be real men like this?.....

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