All Comments on 'The Builder Ch. 05'

Absolutely beautiful... tenderness and caring, yet erotic and physically rewarding. A masterful blend of mind, heart and body. Well done.

I loved the ways that you took us through their lovemaking. It felt like I was there experiencing it with him

I wish you would have built up the story a lot more. Her coming to terms with her innerconflict seemed.. artificial. And then you left out their 'fight' which was confusing in itself.

The ending was nicely done. Very romantic.