All Comments on 'Legacy: Catalyst'

Truly one of the best writers on here . Read one of Lost Boys stories and see for yourself .A true master of the written word ....

Love this series!!!! Really is in my top five! this could easily stand on its own with involving the Avengers. I like them very much, but it seems like they have been added to bring in another audience. So glad to the see sisters play a bigger part in this installment. I am worried about mom, she is far too important to have die so I hope she gets better soon. I also really like the smart watch that is now infused with the knowledge of new book and seems to have a personality of her own.

thanks for sharing

I was wondering when Nick Shaw was going to be mentioned in this story. Loving this new story.

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Definitely a fascinating tale...anxiously waiting for more!

I've only read the Legacy story from this author, so I can't comment on the other stories submitted by Lost Boy.

This story is so good I'm going to start reading the older stories until the next chapter of Legacy is available. Thank you for sharing!

Lou

Amazing writing

Can't wait to read more of your stories....

All the best 😀;-)

I love the concept, good story. I only wish the editing was a little better. It is like random words are missed and the missing commas don't leave the pauses where they should be.

I love this series so much but pleasee make the next part <3 Much love

I have posted the next chapter. It should get approved soon. I am glad you are enjoying the series.

This made me chuckle because it's the perfect dialogue for an old joke . . .

What's the difference between a sadist and a masochist?

The masochist says, "Beat me! BEAT ME!"

And the sadist says, "No."

Your dialogue reads:

"You sick little fuck," I said in her ear. "You came when I hurt you. You really are a masochist."

"Yes."

"I should just ram my cock up your ass without any preparation to teach you a lesson."

"Yes!"

"I could pound that tight little ass of yours until you collapse."

"YES!"

"But I won't," I said as I let got and shoved her away. "You want it too damn bad."

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So, I hope you see why I laughed. ;) Good read. Lots of excellent stroke material. Also love the variety of pussy to be had, and pretty much ANY story where Scarlett takes it up the ass is a good one.

Please keep this story going, I loved the Egyptian parts of the story. Also the magic involved with the plot.

THANK YOU FOR THE STORIES!!!

Loving this story although a little weird 5 stars