All Comments on 'Stepping Out with Steph Ch. 01'

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thekiwicharmerthekiwicharmerover 19 years ago
Excellent Story

Hope chapter 2 is not that far away. Hope your seed has done it's job in your slaves pussy.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
o dear

I thought I was going to enjoy this but then found the writing rather 'Janet and John'-like. It lacked passion and warmth, with non-existent expressions of feeling. I liked the rimming scene but still it felt too objective, fact-based and not feeling-based. There was no 'meat' in the descriptions. Sorry.

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