All Comments on 'Matchmaking Trap Ch. 01'

al you did wrong was made the story go too fast. good idea and characters, but it all came so quickly. this story could be a scorching series, make him her slave slower. torture him a little, and make him do the same to his fiance.

I love the plot and the characters...you tried to put all the actoin of a series into a short story. With such a drastic evolution of character, you should spend time developing the "meat" of the story and the erotic suspense will pay-off.

Let her whip his wimp ass, and have her other lovers jam their dicks hard and painfully up his ass, until he mans up. He needs to become the lover for his mother that his father was. That's what his loving mother wants, needs and deserves.

LOLOLOL! That's like saying liberals use logic instead of feelings when making decisions.

What a joke.