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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/04/04

wow this is hot

please write more! having a older man fetish myself i found it very umm pleasing,*purrss*

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by gdavis10/04/04

Delicious

Clever and well written, you really build up the tension for the next chapter. I thought all the puns were going to ruin in the story, but you smartly limit them as the story goes on.

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by Anonymous10/05/04

Banzai

I thought this a great story, worthy of most anthologies of short stories.
I very much hope you will write more for us, and I look forward to reading about your next visit.

Bruce

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by thewordsmith259007/06/06

Elegant...

A beautiful scene, delicately written... I would love to see another tale in the same setting.

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