All Comments on 'International Incident Ch. 01'

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PhilLustyPhilLustyabout 19 years ago
very different, but thats good

i really enjoyed it, was surprized by the out come but it worked

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Different !

Neither liked nor hated it. Would not mind a second chapter, where the rapist goes too far and is made to pay.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I think that it needs to be flushed out more but overall a good story!

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 4 years ago

Interesting story but needs finishing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Unfinished

I liked this story, but it was seriously unfinished. I think it could use some serious karma against the ambassador. How did he react to the news that his daughter had married the judge, husband of the wife he raped? The married daughter and her mother should speak out about the crimes of her farther, Once public, how many other women would come forward with similar allegations? How would he squirm when the press got hold of the story. How long before the Canadian government withdrew his diplomatic immunity? This guy needs to be humiliated and jailed for his crimes to the extreme. This would give us a complete story. CC

inka2222inka222210 months ago

How is this revenge? The asshole doesn't care in the least about his daughter, so her marrying the guy will mildly annoy him, not hurt him. And the whole garbage about the wife sharing him, is just BS that just detracted from the already-meh story for no benefit.

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