All Comments on 'Sophie's Pale Parts'

What a superb story!, I so remember the inexperienced lust stuttering behind youthful innocence, very exciting.

good start now please continue...hot very hot

please continue.i found this to be a work of considerable promise

What a joy! Achingly drawn out. Charming characters. Loved it. You could continue but in a very sweet way it stands on its own. Bravo!

esl

That is an excellent piece of writing. It captured the feeling of 'inexperienced but interested' in such a realistic way. Whether there is a part 2 or not, this was well worth the reading.

Now please time warp forward to ...

Nice story. If it had gone further it would have been ruined. I think it's hard to make the sequel as good as this, but please try :)

Thanks so much...definitely a cut above what you normally see offered up...intelligent, sweet, real, well-crafted...I agree that a sequel would be challenging but I would certainly look forward to it...as I would more stories from you.

Wow! Is that for real. Do we have women with bushy armpits any more.

please make love to sophie soon.... i cant wait

No, you don't need a sequel. This work stands alone.

However, a complementary story from Sophie's point of view...

I enjoyed it. There was no nadatory fuck scene, and I thought it was a very nice change of pace. Sequel or no, I enjoyed the visuals. I'm big on pale chicks too. Very nice.

detumesce, i had to look thar up ><