All Comments on 'The Boys At The Bar'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Yeah, Right

I can just see three horny fuckers letting a married slut walk out on them, like that. One would have snapped a picture of her, and used her slimy ass for as long as they wanted, and then after they found out who she was, and where she lived, she would have been their pussy for as long as they wanted. get real

z00timez00timeover 19 years ago
IF.....

....needing this kind of action was a problem, why did she marry. She is a slut that will eventually destroy everone around her. She is also very sexy so I enjoyed this write because of the pervert that I am.

p.s This has nothing to do with any particular story but to any story that has some anonymous commentor critisizing someone elses point of view, to all those who do that,

GO FUCK YOURSELF!!

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
New Husband

Nice story but didn't take her long to be a cheating wife

MisterJackMisterJackover 19 years ago
Very hot

So sweet to see her naivete show itself as a longing for more. Like we all, when our guard is down, it's cuz we purposely (perhaps not admittedly) let it down. Hope she finds a way to return there, or a similar lliason with some other lucky someone. Great story.

Jack

cupcakesparkycupcakesparkyabout 13 years ago
Too short!

No shower? No fucking in the shower?

Also, what happened to her friends at the bar?

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